This week’s assignment will require the fewest number of words ever: we want you to write a story – your choice of topic – as a tweet.
I had fun with this topic, so I wrote a couple different ones. I've always been a girl of few words.
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Waiting for years, miscarriages and stillbirths, waiting for a miracle. When you finally look in her eyes, you know it was all worth it.
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She walks alone, not because she has to, but because she wants to. He'll never understand her, because he's never had to walk in her shoes.
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(I wrote this one while BK was asleep on my lap and I was trying to decide what to write!)
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"It's not hard," he tells her. "You scratch my back, I'll scratch yours." Which is fine, except she'd rather stab his back than scratch it.
You're a natural! LOVE the versions that you picked- and I adore the photo that you added!
ReplyDeleteOooo....would love to know the "back" story behind the last one! lol
ReplyDeleteHA! Love that last one! And I have also posted many a tweet about the lap situation. It would seem, by general consensus, that the lap is indeed comfy (I have pics that prove it.. quite similar to yours! haha).
ReplyDeleteYou did great! I wrote about my Miracles as well!
ReplyDeleteI love the picture too!
Yup. That last one is my fave! Love the play on words, and I want to know what he did to piss her off!
ReplyDeleteLove them all. And the picture is great!
ReplyDeleteLove them all. But that last one made me howl!
ReplyDeleteI love all of them too! Great job with the prompt!
ReplyDeleteI love the last one too! They're all great.
ReplyDeleteI love them, but the last one made me laugh out loud.
ReplyDeleteAnd to a child? I don't think there's a better bed than a mama's lap.
Wow, you're good at this! Love the second to last one...that picture is adorable :) And the last one really had a punch, would LOVE to know the rest of the story.
ReplyDeleteThese are all wonderful! I really like the walk in her shoe's "tweet" Well done!
ReplyDeleteLOVE ALL OF THEM! I wrote quite a few too but I'm going to post them to twitter - that's going to be my new twitter thing, posting short stories - this was a really good prompt.
ReplyDeleteLOVE ALL OF THEM! I wrote quite a few too but I'm going to post them to twitter - that's going to be my new twitter thing, posting short stories - this was a really good prompt.
ReplyDeleteIt can be addicting, this tweet writing. Bits of memoir followed by a great story.
ReplyDeleteLoved them all.
Loved these! They're so touching, but that last one, I totally want more of it. ;) Because it's got the mystery feel in there.
ReplyDeleteThey were all wonderful, but my favorite was that last one.
ReplyDeleteThose flowed so awesome! The last one made me laugh out loud.
ReplyDeleteI bet you can't guess which ones were my favorites.
ReplyDeleteThe first and the last. Too sweet and true and too dang FUNNY!
Fantastic. I love that photo - and no, I can't imagine it being very comfy. ;) Of course the last tweet had me in stitches. You have another reader wanting to know the rest of the story! ;)
ReplyDeleteThesevare awesome. I love the second one.
ReplyDeleteThesevare awesome. I love the second one.
ReplyDeleteWOW! Love the last two! =D
ReplyDeleteThey were all very fun. Love how some were mommy stuff, and some were darker.
ReplyDeleteThose were great :) Thank you for sharing them.
ReplyDeleteThe 3rd and 4th ones were my favorites - they really told a story and painted a picture in my head, even without the one included (oh, how many times I've written with a sleeping baby in my lap).
ReplyDeleteThe 4th one really made me curious about the story, and I think I may have laughed as I read it.. It really grabbed your attention.
Nice job.
Looks like you had a great time with this one! Really like the one at the end! :>
ReplyDeleteI really like the last one!! That's right up my alley!!
ReplyDeleteI'm on wordpress now, but still have a google account.
Love that last one!
ReplyDeleteOh you're good!!
ReplyDeleteI love the last one! Sometimes I'd like to get a little stabby.
The lap nap tried its best to sway me, but I love the last one best! Nice work.
ReplyDeletemy fave is the last one. totally been there.
ReplyDeleteThose were so good!
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing how much can be said with so few words.