Thursday, August 25, 2011

Twitterisms

The Assignment: 
This week’s assignment will require the fewest number of words ever: we want you to write a story – your choice of topic – as a tweet.


I had fun with this topic, so I wrote a couple different ones. I've always been a girl of few words. 


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Waiting for years, miscarriages and stillbirths, waiting for a miracle. When you finally look in her eyes, you know it was all worth it.

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She walks alone, not because she has to, but because she wants to. He'll never understand her, because he's never had to walk in her shoes.

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The baby is sleeping across her lap as she stares at the computer, waiting to be inspired. Does her lap make a comfy bed? Not likely.

(I wrote this one while BK was asleep on my lap and I was trying to decide what to write!)



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"It's not hard," he tells her. "You scratch my back, I'll scratch yours." Which is fine, except she'd rather stab his back than scratch it.









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33 comments:

  1. You're a natural! LOVE the versions that you picked- and I adore the photo that you added!

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  2. Oooo....would love to know the "back" story behind the last one! lol

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  3. HA! Love that last one! And I have also posted many a tweet about the lap situation. It would seem, by general consensus, that the lap is indeed comfy (I have pics that prove it.. quite similar to yours! haha).

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  4. You did great! I wrote about my Miracles as well!
    I love the picture too!

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  5. Yup. That last one is my fave! Love the play on words, and I want to know what he did to piss her off!

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  6. Love them all. And the picture is great!

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  7. Love them all. But that last one made me howl!

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  8. I love all of them too! Great job with the prompt!

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  9. I love the last one too! They're all great.

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  10. I love them, but the last one made me laugh out loud.

    And to a child? I don't think there's a better bed than a mama's lap.

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  11. Wow, you're good at this! Love the second to last one...that picture is adorable :) And the last one really had a punch, would LOVE to know the rest of the story.

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  12. These are all wonderful! I really like the walk in her shoe's "tweet" Well done!

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  13. LOVE ALL OF THEM! I wrote quite a few too but I'm going to post them to twitter - that's going to be my new twitter thing, posting short stories - this was a really good prompt.

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  14. LOVE ALL OF THEM! I wrote quite a few too but I'm going to post them to twitter - that's going to be my new twitter thing, posting short stories - this was a really good prompt.

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  15. It can be addicting, this tweet writing. Bits of memoir followed by a great story.
    Loved them all.

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  16. Loved these! They're so touching, but that last one, I totally want more of it. ;) Because it's got the mystery feel in there.

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  17. They were all wonderful, but my favorite was that last one.

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  18. Those flowed so awesome! The last one made me laugh out loud.

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  19. I bet you can't guess which ones were my favorites.

    The first and the last. Too sweet and true and too dang FUNNY!

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  20. Fantastic. I love that photo - and no, I can't imagine it being very comfy. ;) Of course the last tweet had me in stitches. You have another reader wanting to know the rest of the story! ;)

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  21. Thesevare awesome. I love the second one.

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  22. Thesevare awesome. I love the second one.

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  23. They were all very fun. Love how some were mommy stuff, and some were darker.

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  24. Those were great :) Thank you for sharing them.

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  25. The 3rd and 4th ones were my favorites - they really told a story and painted a picture in my head, even without the one included (oh, how many times I've written with a sleeping baby in my lap).

    The 4th one really made me curious about the story, and I think I may have laughed as I read it.. It really grabbed your attention.

    Nice job.

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  26. Looks like you had a great time with this one! Really like the one at the end! :>

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  27. I really like the last one!! That's right up my alley!!

    I'm on wordpress now, but still have a google account.

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  28. Oh you're good!!
    I love the last one! Sometimes I'd like to get a little stabby.

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  29. The lap nap tried its best to sway me, but I love the last one best! Nice work.

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  30. my fave is the last one. totally been there.

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  31. Those were so good!

    It's amazing how much can be said with so few words.

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